Lovely.She had become a character in a story; but it was her story, not mine.
Pirates of the Archipelago - The Guiding Star
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Ooh, nice. I love the hidden depths of this story, and in particular the hints of Emmy's (rather melancholy) self-awareness.
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Re: Pirates of the Archipelago - The Guiding Star
I should have added - I hardly ever use beta readers as it seems rather an imposition, but this story benefited greatly from Celerity's help and my thanks go to her.
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For anyone who's interested, the final version of this story is now up at fictionpress.com - The Guiding Star. The differences are minor matters of tidying-up and polishing. The actual story hasn't changed.
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