The Republic of Heaven

Wow, dis is DA BOMB, Peter. You're writing this? Ubber awesome!

Please don't stop, Im immersed, I need closure here.....

Please don't stop, Im immersed, I need closure here.....

I think this one is going to turn out to be about the same length as the previous Johanna Chen story, A Child of Glory, so you won't get any closure just yet

Sorry!

Arrgh!!! Ah well, at least I won't hafta weep when it ends, like I have my other faves...... I suppose unrequited closure is better than the grief of a series comin to an end.

ooer, backstory!
highly intriguing, peter, as always.

So - I've recast the whole story into the present tense. Why? Mostly because I hated the part that was in the pluperfect (where Jo was arguing with the Comrades). But also because A Child of Glory was in the present tense as well and I feel that's the best way to tell Johanna's story.

Anyway, that's the way it's going to be from here on in.